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ThegunsofNevada #1 horror fan Posts: 52	Oy? Jan 12, 2005 1:44:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ThegunsofNevada on Jan 12, 2005 1:44:23 GMT -5 Hey... Could you please read my story Silence and do your thing? Thanks!
	"Lets see...Combat knife, machate, crowbar, Colt .45, three boxes of ammo, Remington 870, bandoler of 3'' magnum 00 buck, broadsword, PASGT helmet, Kevlar vest, G36K...Yeah, I think i need to make a run by the gun shop first." --Cassidy Forwarded message from Norn Iron: Nuke the German ships

Mixmastercereal The Editor I erase the mistakes. Posts: 13	Oy? Jan 13, 2005 16:50:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mixmastercereal on Jan 13, 2005 16:50:51 GMT -5 yeah, actually, you've really improved on all the grammar and stuff, just occasional misspellings, and I was really impressed with the story, good idea, all dialogue
	"I don't get mad, I get stabby." - Fat Tony

Mentat zombie Posts: 19	Oy? Jan 23, 2005 22:02:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mentat on Jan 23, 2005 22:02:45 GMT -5 As I told you in IM I just tried to fix up The Trip again. Could you check it for me as well?

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